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From: Shaun Donovan
Date: 21 May 2003
Time: 01:34:11 -0600
Remote Name: 216.99.241.214
Sorry I haven't written anything lately. Finals and having a cold made it hard to read. Just finish last night. Anyway, I like the new stuff. The four kids intrigue me. They are Mara's and Skuld's, right? My real question is this: In 106 you put at the very end:Underneath the ice, captured in perfect, crystalline stillness like a fly in amber or a figure in a amethystine Wyeth painting...was Belldandy! Yet in 107 you have: The possibility that Belldandy may have been stranded in another Multiverse during the creation of the OmniArc occurred to me. But even then, Urd and Skuld would certainly be able to sense their sister's presence with the invisible-string bond of Divine perception that they shared between them. But try as they might, each sister couldn't sense any trace of Belldandy. Could you please elaborate. Did they or didn't they find her in the ice? If they did why would they be worrying about find her if they already know where she is. Just a thought. Can't wait for the next chapter. Revelations and Conundrums around every corner. "Revelations and Conundrums" could be an arc title. Peace.
