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Re: new chapters

From: BarricadeAMRN
Date: 17 May 2003
Time: 22:11:09 -0600
Remote Name: 4.65.29.60

Comments

I like the drawing of Mara as a teenaged Goddess. She quite literally fits the part (Ms. Airhead - No, thats not a complaint, I like it!). The one and only critic/suggestion I have is that perhaps you should have changed her facial markings to match those Cven mentioned in the story, and not have kept her Demoness markings. Outside of that, it looks great.


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